You emphasized the ending part very well. You where able to turn something seemingly simple into something much more. I could feel you felt attached to your story, and I loved the words you used to describe the setting as well as your moral. "Flaunt those scars," was defiantly my favorite part.
The scars and bruises reminds us of memories was good
ReplyDeleteYou emphasized the ending part very well. You where able to turn something seemingly simple into something much more. I could feel you felt attached to your story, and I loved the words you used to describe the setting as well as your moral. "Flaunt those scars," was defiantly my favorite part.
ReplyDeleteDon't be so hesitant your story is so good!
ReplyDeleteGreat Description! I could picture the setting throughout the whole story! -(Greg)
ReplyDeleteI am now afraid not to wear sunscreen.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story
ReplyDeleteThe picture and the music helps to visualize the background.
Maggie F