Meriwether, this podcast is phenomenal, as I was listening to it, I could picture everything happening good job :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
You did a fantastic job. The descriptive words you used set the scene perfectly. Your voice was confidant, and it seemed like you where very comfortable with telling the story. I'm glad I got the chance to listen to it, I really not only enjoyed how you told it, but it was a very interesting story anyway.
Veyr descriptive! I actually felt as though I was there, it's a very traumatic experience and you described it almost as though even you were there. Great job!
Nice job in the visual snapshots. I really got a good picture of what happened. I also liked the tone changes in you're voice as you told the story.
ReplyDeleteyou have a good voice and i can picture it really well
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a very traumatic experience for your mom and aunt.
ReplyDeleteMeriwether, this podcast is phenomenal, as I was listening to it, I could picture everything happening good job :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job. The descriptive words you used set the scene perfectly. Your voice was confidant, and it seemed like you where very comfortable with telling the story. I'm glad I got the chance to listen to it, I really not only enjoyed how you told it, but it was a very interesting story anyway.
ReplyDeleteMeri, this is a very sad story and I could picture it very well. great use of vocabulary.(Caitlyn Smith)
ReplyDeleteHahaha your so comfortable when you talk! That's a great skill to have Meri! Great description and the POV on the story was great! -(Greg)
ReplyDeleteVeyr descriptive! I actually felt as though I was there, it's a very traumatic experience and you described it almost as though even you were there. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou did such a good job talking! Great job on putting good description and the tone in your voice.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story a lot
ReplyDeleteThe description in the story is very good
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