Jessie, I really enjoyed this story, It ended differently then I thought it would, and that was a nice surprise.I loved the tone use and all of the pauses you took. (-Madi S)
I like how the end of your story was different then you would think it would end. I liked your voice. You described the story very well! It was a nice story! I liked it. (Brianna Frey)
Jessie, I really enjoyed this story, It ended differently then I thought it would, and that was a nice surprise.I loved the tone use and all of the pauses you took. (-Madi S)
ReplyDeleteI like how the end of your story was different then you would think it would end. I liked your voice. You described the story very well! It was a nice story! I liked it. (Brianna Frey)
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