This is a remarkable story, with two courageous heroines! Every facet—story craft, vocal animation, music, and image—complement the whole. Well done, Destiny!
Really great story, you did a great job reading it, telling the listeners how you felt about the new baby, and you used great description! Nice job (Cole K)
What an amazing story. listing to your story made me appreciate my mom more. unfortunately i was 6 when my mom had her last baby and i didn't get to experience the stress and excitement that you went through. the music and the pic went with the story good. i liked the audio quality and the tone of your voice throughout the story. you did a fun-tastic job and i am looking Ford to more of your work. p.s. my mom also craved pickles when she was pregnant with me (RILEY S)
I thought that your story was great the music fit the story very well. the emotion in your voice added a lot to the story the wording was detailed Maggie F
This is a remarkable story, with two courageous heroines! Every facet—story craft, vocal animation, music, and image—complement the whole. Well done, Destiny!
ReplyDeleteThis is such as great story Destiny. You are obviously an amazing writer. You had great visual snapshots, you did a fantastic job, I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteReally great story, you did a great job reading it, telling the listeners how you felt about the new baby, and you used great description! Nice job (Cole K)
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story. listing to your story made me appreciate my mom more. unfortunately i was 6 when my mom had her last baby and i didn't get to experience the stress and excitement that you went through. the music and the pic went with the story good. i liked the audio quality and the tone of your voice throughout the story. you did a fun-tastic job and i am looking Ford to more of your work. p.s. my mom also craved pickles when she was pregnant with me (RILEY S)
ReplyDeleteYou really communicate your longing for the "baby stuff" that your brother went through before he "grew out of it".
ReplyDeleteI like your usage of the word climbed in the phrase, "climbed through her pregnancy."
I thought that your story was great
ReplyDeletethe music fit the story very well.
the emotion in your voice added a lot to the story
the wording was detailed
Maggie F