Monday, December 1, 2014

Stable Ground by Ryley Leech

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  1. AnonymousDecember 2, 2014 at 11:14 AM

    I like your metaphors. Gideon Wheeler

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  2. AnonymousDecember 2, 2014 at 1:00 PM

    I'm glad she was okay and didn't get pneumonia from the cold. (Casi)

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  3. UnknownDecember 3, 2014 at 4:02 PM

    I like how you changed your tone at certain parts and i liked how you described some parts.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 3, 2014 at 6:53 PM

    I like how you used a lot of description and the way you told this event. I also like your intro music it fits well. -Nathan Leslie

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